I would add more contrast by dropping the papers the letters are on and the sky behind the mountain (or at least the snow) to a lighter tone. Maybe not quite white, but you could try white and then tone it back if needed. Just feels a little too monotone to me. Other than that, I like it a lot.
I added the few changes - Here you can see the before/after.
Thanks to Kate I decided to add a little black line to show the ground so they're not floating
ReplyDeleteI would add more contrast by dropping the papers the letters are on and the sky behind the mountain (or at least the snow) to a lighter tone. Maybe not quite white, but you could try white and then tone it back if needed. Just feels a little too monotone to me. Other than that, I like it a lot.
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